Pretty good for your first submission, but unfortunately it was a bit hard to read the font you chose.
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True , going to improve in it.
It's good you don't like racism but it just needed a bit more work
dx5231
Do not like it. But gave it a 3
Klaineks
It's ur opinion and i ain't apriciate it. Thanks for comment.